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I walk along this narrowed path
Wondering, caught inside my past
There's nothing here to make me forget
The circumstances that ended our bond
The bond we had...I thought it strong
But it wasn't strong enough
It couldn't withstand my flaws and weaknesses
It buckled, it cracked, and finally crumbled
Now as I walk down this path
I see her walking the opposite way
I look at her and she back at me
I try to smile, but I'm too afraid
My lips twitch at the corners
A small smile
She sees it, and she quickly looks away
As we pass each other she looks back
But keep walking the path
I don't want to look back and see her face
Because I still remember
How much I hurt her
The lies
The deception
The unnessecary fights
So I walk the path
And hope time cures the silence
©2007-2009 =FyrethilPhoenix
:iconfyrethilphoenix:

Author's Comments

I don't know WHERE this came from, but it just came to mind while I was sitting at the rec center *shrug*

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:iconshadowofthedesert:
O: I like this. It's pretty and one of the best written poems I've read in a while! ^_^
:iconauthoress123:
WOw! I have creativiy bursts like that too. :P This is so beautifully written and an excellent piece of poetry.

You did a wonderful job! D:D
:iconfyrethilphoenix:
Thanks ^_^

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"Don't try to fix me...
I'm not broken..."
:iconfyrethilphoenix:
Thanks so much!

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"Don't try to fix me...
I'm not broken..."
:iconvanweyden:
Wow. This is exceptionally well written! The conveyance of emotion alongside thoughts is amazing.

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